Woohoo! Look what I can do!

[paintedhorizon]

Wildmare helped me start this. I finished it and it's now on the APF boards! WOOHOO! My first time making an ad too!

If you have a critique, please PM it to me. Not here.

A.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y65/jklawitter/Paso%20Fino/StellaRevised.jpg
B.
http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y65/jklawitter/Paso%20Fino/StellaRevised-1.jpg

Which do you like better?

[Jasfino]

It looks nice! Good job... :D

[PLEASURE PASOFINO]

Sorry!!!! but I need to critic this in public,




LOOKS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Heidi]

I like B.

I like the top and bottom sentences being a larger type than the center paragraph.
I also like the photos of the 4 horses being mixed up so the two with really green backgrounds don't look like they are standing 'together'.

Unless all four horse photos are standing stallions, would you want to consider including a foal, and if she offers training maybe a pic of a Paso w/ a rider?
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[paintedhorizon]

Thank PNalley for the really geren backgrounds not standing together! LOL

All four horses are standing stallions. She didn't want any more pics on there. LOL I would have put more. I like B.

I like the top and bottom sentences being a larger type than the center paragraph.
I also like the photos of the 4 horses being mixed up so the two with really green backgrounds don't look like they are standing 'together'.

Unless all four horse photos are standing stallions, would you want to consider including a foal, and if she offers training maybe a pic of a Paso w/ a rider?
h

Caliber, coming from you, that's an awesome compliment! Thanks!

[Moniece Dickerson]

Both look GREAT but B is the better of the two IMHO.You did an EXCELLENT job and Stella will be very pleased i'm sure.Your friend,Moniece